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Potential Energy Is Inversely Proportional To Kinetic Energy aka THE PHYSICS OF FALLING HAIR
fractalcore

i realize that the eyes grow
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annual rings, too, but age most likely shows
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at how nearer the edge of your hair gets
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to the ground, as you stand erect
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to a fixed height any moment
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after puberty --
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written 05/29/08
http://poetrycritical.net/read/18323/

thanks, midare.
happy birthday on June 20th in advance.

to AlchemiA, too, on June 21st;

to joey on i'm not sure which day
(turns out to be June 24th);

and to countless others born --
and wed -- in June.


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3 Jun 08

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nice title ;)

well worded observation..
 — Mongrol

I love this.....
This has got to be the most original bit of writing I've seen in a while.
 — Thirteen

Mongrol:

very kind of you, man.
thank you so much.


unknown:

i bet they do. did you write
a poem about it?


Thirteen:

oh that's very kind.
thank you so much for reading.

: )
 — fractalcore

Big Sun Day is June 21st which is my B'day the Solstice - big soul day - the two laws which grin are the law of falling short and the law of catching up -- when I read your stuff I grin from mid air and laugh tumbling down to earthen rumbles about our being mud brothers -- I've caught up to the edge of near sightedness whirling a'Dervishing vanishing in AWE -- write on fractaliscious
 — AlchemiA

happy birthday in advance, AlchemiA.
and to joey as well, i believe.

and to the countless others born in June.

[and, incidentally, to the brides and grooms
for whom countless earthly rebirths will start.]
: )
 — fractalcore

you have a really enjoyable sense of humor that i love encountering. we need spirits like that in the world. i'm really glad you have that.

this poem has that. but, it doesn't mean your seriousness for poetry, and extracting quality, isn't there. which it is.

such a nice, positive dualism.
 — listen

thank you so much, listen.
i never thought i had any sense of humor
as i view myself as a very serious guy and
you say it's there. it's the optic annual rings,
i think, hehe. thanks again for the very kind
words.
: )
 — fractalcore

bumpster me, hehe.
: )
 — fractalcore

Excellent.

9.
 — stackpop

thank you, stackpop.
: )
 — fractalcore

hello, PC.
; )
 — fractalcore

happy belated, ewe guys.
; )
 — fractalcore

it's midare's big day on
the 20th of june.
; )
 — fractalcore

birthday happy burp, AlchemiA.
; )
 — fractalcore

ahh, yer a sweetie, thanks fractalisciousness
 — AlchemiA

nicely done. a true write. real.
 — psychofemale

ey Alc,

how goes eat?
hope mike's not too busy
putting tug-ether that book
he's giving to his cancer-stricken
friend as a gift.

party hard, dued.
long live, both of you...
and the rest.


...namaskar...


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 — fractalcore

psychofemale,

you're very kind as usual.
thanks for reading.

; )
 — fractalcore

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