|Whiny the Pooh Breaks the Glass Box
ooh, the masses know it --
all the meek remarks
and lazy lip-syncs
bleached by pistachios
or the variety of fries;
the amorous chances
of robust wiles of
annoy 'em --
golden tongue and verdant palms
the Pooh has, does [k]now;
bearable hugs -- they,
bear aware, secrets mangled
title revised 06/13/08
13 Jun 08
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ok, the glass is broken.
hi, listen. i think this is the time that the limiting box
is written about.
now did somebody devoice you, listen?
i'd like to hear your opinion on this one.
am i being absurd with this piece?
you've read trochee's poem that inspired this, right?
thanks again, DL.
hope to hear from you, liste.
hi listen, i need your opinion on this.
is it the kind of box you had in mind?
though this is not really a concrete
shape poem. thanks.
i love it Fractalcore. i think this works out really well. line fifteen really incorporates your theme really well, also some nice word manipulation.
sorry about the delayed response, it wasn't because i was ignoring the piece.
however, you leave me in humorous pieces with that last stanza. i hope more people read this.
well, i hope they do and i'm sure a lot of them already did.
i mean, i welcome all sorts of comments. hey, i'm not perfect.
thank you so much for your comments, listen.
:) me likey
thank you so much, markfelician.
now where are the cukk-tie-fixated guys when
you need them?
finger fractaLiscious good -- golden'd tongue in cheek -- big bearABLE hugs
did u know old whiney is from my home town? whineyPeg -- whinny the poo was invented from Winnipeg
i saw that commercial paid for by the government detailing the naissance d'idee milne
hi, AlchemiA. yes, i think that the Pooh was
invented from Winnipeg. thanks for stopping by.
unk, i haven't seen that commercial but thanks for
hm, really neat fract.
i thought of "bare aware" but it may not make the right sense.
well, bear knows, hence bear aware.