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ABCD...
fractalcore

All this is who-whAt?
 1
Better Be good or i will
 2
Call the author-writtees
 3
Dead meat ones, twice, thrice
 4
 
 
EvEn
 5
Four times
 6
 
 
Gawdamnit!
 7
 
 
Hate
 8
Is
 9
Just
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Killing
 11
Lots of
 12
Men
 13
Not to meNtioN we-meN
 14
Over a shOrt
 15
Pukin' Period of
 16
Quintessential
 17
Rudeness --
 18
 
 
Shall we all
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Talk not jusT To be nice buT wiTh
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Utmost care and Understanding, too?
 21
 
 
Veer a-
 22
Way from
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X-plicit childishness; end the
 24
Youth-is-lost-in-me-and-i-can't-be-a-child-other-than-childish
 25
Zeal.
 26
 
 
5, 6, 7, 8, 9
 27
zero in-too-it,
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we,us,you,me
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and-i.
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written 06/15/08
http://poetrycritical.net/read/48933/
thank you so much, section4.

18 Jun 08

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oh thanks for the fave, nisetru.
any comments?
: )
 — fractalcore

yoohoo, cukk-tie...
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 — fractalcore

ooh, that's an hypocrite, er epic crit, hehe.
i doze off a lot myself. thunks, unky.
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 — fractalcore

Didn't know you'd posted this one. Dig the flow

Hate
Is
Just
Killing
Lots of
Men
Not to meNtioN we-meN
Over a shOrt
Pukin' Period of
Quintessential
Rudeness --

Music to my ears. Love it.
 — section4

your kindness is music to my ears, too.
thank you.
: )
 — fractalcore

nice work it makes me want to danc.;)
 — unknown

EFGHIJKLMNOPQRSTUVWXY......Z.
Frack-o-wack is back.
;)
 — mandolyn

dubber rucky quack quack!

ey, rubber mandolyn.
gneiss two see ewe hear.

; )
 — fractalcore

dear unk,

it'd be nice to see you dance.
thanks a lot for reading.

: )
 — fractalcore

That's MONKEY mandolyn to you.
;-)
 — mandolyn

nope.

RUBBER mandolyn.

bleh.

; )
 — fractalcore

year. muthah.
 — mandolyn

bleh-bleh.
duh-duh.

nah-duh.
bah-bahhh...

; )
 — fractalcore

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