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Abc...D (revisited)
DeformedLion

A hillbilly, no a born again
 1
bigot, with newspaper eyes and
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crows feet etched on his shoulder blades...
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"Dylan?" he mutters, from ear-to-
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ear,           as though chewing on the thought
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formed in open-space as green-eyed
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grad. students flutter about the
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                     qu
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                     ad,
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hoping to get some of that undergrad. ass.
 10
 
 
"its a miracle, a fuck'm miracle" he chews,
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jumping on the spot, crow screeching, c(l)awing,
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k-k-k-umm, no...kancer of the mind
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pointing to the Heavens, iridescent, gleaming
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over a two-pound chicky-dee, yeah, well
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never look a gift horse in the ass
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might s(h)it on you, yes, you
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lay-lady lay...lay upon a smoking grass bed.
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quote me "spoke the earnest man, earnestly
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resting on the downy earth".
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Sister Agath-ommo-nagather, well
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Timmy the Tool sure tooled her.
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U-oy kids though, slippin' on the leaves,
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vacillating over the holy
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whores of Chris, well, drunk and pissing really...
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X-marks the spot.
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Y? is the groove to which he "Dylans"
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Zebras dance by, pedestrians try and walk on 'em. ?eah.
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21 Jun 08

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E F G,
H I J K,
stop.
 — unknown

i like what you did in S3 with that sequence inversion.
so there's actually a big talk about zebras now?
: )
 — fractalcore

got bored. changed it.

thanks fractal, unknown, and invisible boy.
 — DeformedLion

got change for a dimebag darrel?
no?


good.
: )
 — fractalcore

did u invert L M N O P on purpose? clever jocular indiscreet makes this x-rated alpha-bet complete
 — AlchemiA

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