|In Bed with Shharapova
b O i n g
b o i N g
b O i n g
b o ı Ng
bO ı n g
b o ı. N g
22 Jun 08
Rated 10 (7.7) by 2 users.
Active (2): 10
Inactive (7): 1, 1, 6, 7, 10, 10, 10, 10
(define the words in this poem)
(2 users consider this poem a favorite)
Add A Comment:
Gee, that's cute. Nothing to carp about here. I like it, especially that the "i" appears to be emboldened (bolded).
nice :) movement of the balls, o and n; funny.. also cause i thought twas inspired by that advertisement on the tv, "russians with their sounds" sommmething yup..
a shap'd pome that recalls the festive body dances jumping up and down on the old spring bed's as children squealing with delight --
this is cool.
seems to me that the i is ejaculating.
look: the dot on it is being launched.
Ta for comments. Was going to call it "Forbidden love" [Hope it's reasonably obvious why] but on checking worldwide ages of consent I was quite amazed! (especially with Spain)
Fault! 30 ~love.
Nice form poem... the "I" is highlighted, showing the self-involved aspect of sex, the moving oh like a trail of smoke or the cry escaping... the n and g coming together for the moan. I think of the B as the bouncing spring.
Heh! Thx to both. :)
now do the concord
she's still got it. just.
design & code copyright donald tetto
. all poems copyright their original authors.