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forensic
unknown

under finger nails:
 1
nylon strands pair
 2
with unfamiliar DNA
 3
 
 
     souvenirs
 4
from disobedient
 5
   transactions.
 6





watson crick

23 Jun 08

Rated 8 (9) by 1 users.
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This is good, compact, tight, interesting and creative.  
 — Isabelle5

Thankz
 — unknown

Interesting, compelling, tight.  Good read.
Gombola
 — unknown

this gave me the willies
 — peoplescareT

Creepy and clinical, with a touch of sensuality.
I'm way into it.
 — SodaKid

This certainly goes along with PST's 'murder' thread!  How good the timing is!

The poem is apt, small but well phrased, complete.
 — Isabelle5

changed
 — unknown

:) neat
 — psychofemale

cool
 — unknown

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