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Top Bottoms Out, Lapses
6saysaysay9

Down, down mojito, let's hit a bump,
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lollipops and poppers
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and things that end in -uction
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   silly faggot fey-go figure
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   lips wrap fingers in my pucker
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   tight like ketamine lace
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   in - flux - u - ate
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   deliver ease
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       ah
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             fuck, oh please.
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   drowning, gasping under toes
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   growing, going...
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     (SHIT!) goes.
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Here
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drawn up to fit your flexing mold
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     or cast.  Either way,
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filled in quite outside my lines.
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Complete my sine,
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complicate your sin.
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   again? again.
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   submitting? given.
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   around and around and up you go...
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Maintenant, garcon!
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Stupid tape's still on.
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                         off.
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      --blink--
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  static. static? buzz. snoring in my bed.
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oh. a fruity mound of ex-ripe
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peach-fuzzy flesh.
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Silly faggot. Tricked by a kid.
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28 Jun 08

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silly winrar, trumped by a crc. this is sort of fun as long as i don't have to read it with someone else and hear his laughing at the obvious and crinching at the paradoxhyde blond in the corner.
 — joey

aye don undeestunt dis.
seelee trickery.
: )
 — fractalcore

oh...... I enjoyed this. Topping from the bottom, are you?
 — banditfemme

i never sit and tell.
thanks, poets.
 — 6saysaysay9

the bottom with the promise of a top -- a fun ride and a devil may care 'in you end doh' playground of onomatopoeia and games lovers play in between the sheets -- every top has a bottom and so does this pome
 — AphroDite

awesome.
 — Magdala

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