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Every
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Every raindrop is a suicide
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bird crashing into my windowpane
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6 Jul 08

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nice imagining, i love watching how the raindrops brake against the window, heavy, splashy, clear. but when birds crash into windows they don't really die, no matter how serious the impact, i've seen such events several times, it's like they can't see the glass and fly into it, and i've even seen spots at the place of impact, feathery like or at least traces, but then they fly away.
 — nisetru

can i use mosquitoes in lieu
of the birds?
: )
 — fractalcore

nice poem...netsky.
 — unknown

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