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write for years

i could write about you	1
from here until sunrise	2
maybe longer	3

an endless book	4
describing every feature	5
every quip	6
every eye lash swurve	7

15 Jul 08

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pretty chic, nice style. "swurve" swurves this out of the six items or less checkout line and into the open court, the place where people are reading.

nice writing.
— joey

I know the feeling well. Sinks in. Makes me nostalgic.
— nugunz

thanks :)
— unknown

well, then, write for years on end, poet.
: )
— fractalcore

*sigh* i think i might have to.
— unknown

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