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write for years
SweetPain

i could write about you
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from here until sunrise
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maybe longer
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an endless book
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describing every feature
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every quip
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every eye lash swurve
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15 Jul 08

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pretty chic, nice style. "swurve" swurves this out of the six items or less checkout line and into the open court, the place where people are reading.

nice writing.
 — joey

I know the feeling well.  Sinks in.  Makes me nostalgic.  
 — nugunz

thanks :)
 — unknown

well, then, write for years on end, poet.
: )
 — fractalcore

*sigh* i think i might have to.
 — unknown

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