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Setting sun,
Soaked at sea,
Shedding skin
Significant yesterday,
Pause and replay.
Field trip of thoughts,
Pluck out dismay.
S t a r t  F r e s h

16 Jul 08

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I like it.  It's fresh and it's clean; resillient.  :-)
 — starr

Whoops.  Put in an extra "L" in resilient.  Ma bad.  :-O
 — starr

is this a repost?

i think i've read it already.
nice writing.
: )
 — fractalcore