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Mantraic
markfelician

Setting sun,
 1
Soaked at sea,
 2
Shedding skin
 3
Serenity.
 4
 
 
Significant yesterday,
 5
Pause and replay.
 6
Field trip of thoughts,
 7
Pluck out dismay.
 8
 
 
S t a r t  F r e s h
 9

16 Jul 08

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I like it.  It's fresh and it's clean; resillient.  :-)
 — starr

Whoops.  Put in an extra "L" in resilient.  Ma bad.  :-O
 — starr

is this a repost?

i think i've read it already.
nice writing.
: )
 — fractalcore

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