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aknew gones away hear
fractalcore

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          1900 on the piano/keyboard
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   you yourself as the conductor of sorts
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          in your shorts like the PUSA
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                 or in nuffin like Flee
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               jaw-wee as the sound
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                  engineer and lens
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                          master
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              that's about my fantasy
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                           super
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                      bandwagon...
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          popcorn, bottomless iced tea
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             and me on my itchy butt
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                  on the center isle
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                        lights out!
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                         rock on!
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er aisle, and i linger there for a while
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longer, waiting for my eardrums to burst
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in laughter thereafter.
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hmm, i'm such a bad speller under a spell.
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written 07/14/08
http://poetrycritical.net/forum/read/149636/
thanks, nugunz & joey.
: )

18 Jul 08


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Hahaha! Write on.
 — nugunz

Should maybe be Flea?  Oh, I don't know. Cool shit.
 — nugunz

Guess that might've been where the bad spller under a spell came in :)
 — nugunz

yes, ewe gut eat write.
: )
 — fractalcore

this needs to be rated number "1" --
er, to be given that rating, that is, hehe.
: )
 — fractalcore

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