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Folding in upon itself
Softly, whisper coming out,
high shelf residency.
Picked ripened consumed
a piece of me for all of you.
Tapping rapidly upon the gash.
Shallow diving upper crust,
flamboyant mince kettle
boils over the bottom.
Hole held imaginary.
Forgetting fleeting fornication,
comes slowly, cup
filled halfway house
pitch your mind bent
mid air-fiving
for pretty persuasions

23 Jul 08

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this is an interesting choice
your title-
i enjoyed your words in line four and five.  
 — Liliana

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 — fractalcore

this has some nice moves -- unexpected turns of phrases -- the happenstance of meaning in the words your gleaning for us here, brings you near, dear
 — AlchemiA