poetry critical

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Random Poem:

Breath of a Salesman.
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My eyes stroll about the room,
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light from the window glaring, destroying all chance
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of viewing the vast expanse of beauty;
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Nature’s smile at me.
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Surrounded by buildings, Willy cried
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out, "You have to break your neck
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just to catch a view of a star out here
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nowadays..."
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My ears sense the sounds seeping through the wall;
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malicious words; they mock me.
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They all believe there’s something wrong
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with who and how I am.
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“I heard what you said!” Willy shouted to Biff.
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“Who laughs at me, who?”
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“Oh, you know I didn’t mean it like that, Dad."
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No words were ever so hurtful.
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My mind sprints through all possible options...
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There’s no way to get ahead, and
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I’m beginning to get desperate...
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I’m beginning to get very desperate.
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“It’s an amazing proposition...”
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“What a remarkable thing.”
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The last thing the family heard was
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Willy’s car pulling away, and a crash.
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Back into my English classroom,
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I hear the complaints, the hates;
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the fear of culture and lack of relation;
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"You can't relate?" I ask.
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"I’ve never related so well in all my life."
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