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3rd world Country
Sweaty Palms facing God.
23 Jul 08
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Line 3 is kind of awkward.
True, but maybe replace environment with something that doesn't sound so grade 4 science class.
thank you mindbodysoul
Ah, all points toward Mecca. Nicely put and shown.
Sweaty palms...Happy birthday, Mark.
people already know your birthday?
born on the cusp, are you?
although the poem is in list-form, it ends with a powerful image.
nope, no cusp. i was looking at the date on this poem.
thanks jen and unknown (??? :) yep just turned 25 and i feel like 40 or sumthin.
that's good, because when you turn 40, you will feel 25!
this makes me think all countries are 3rd world.
nice slant image, format and message.
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