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hung
stout

words
 1
rip
 2
curl
 3
sack
 4
falter
 5
and repeat
 6
 
 
hunt
 7
scent
 8
 
 
prepare the battlefield
 9
harvest the harvest
 10
 
 
suck all the marrow
 11

24 Jul 08

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Stout-- unmistakable Stout scent. Could this also be a sly allusion to literary criticism? not one flabby modifier. Chased and sleek.
 — banditfemme

chased hehe!
that's a great and most wondrous idea, thank you
 — chuckle_s

nice words
 — chuckle_s

i love criticism
but handle it badly.
i don't know about modifiers, got to find out
the band is a not a bad band
 — stout

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