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Lizard & Marigold
bettalpha

Darting lizard
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I am of a contemplative mind,
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wide on my stoned,
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head driven on high and
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Marigold sat by the ivy,
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rare and beautiful,
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in the greenhouse of memory-
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All thought in her eye. Frail,
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my breath overcome by
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mechanic of the lung;
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to keep Marigold
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from stirring.
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25 Jul 08

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stoned...high...greenhouse...breath. i'm gettin the muchies just thinkin about it.
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i love this. nothing more to say.
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jah, rasta.
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very frail and cute :)
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l10 the sticking out a sore thumb.
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lovely poem.
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unstirred?
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