|INTRANCE | 8'SIT
31 Jul 08
Rated 10 (4) by 1 users.
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short and sweet. lines 1 through 3 are my favourite, not sure about the rest though ;-)
thank you, sir.
not sure about the rest either.
i'll just get back to it but
any suggestions though?
a bit wordy
the space is works for you
am I me
we I am
a wee meme am I
I went to gnormals piece and read the explanation in which I found fully a Lover
i like you in this place.
i like you because you hear me.
i like you because you are here.
i like you to be here. love, me.
i, like you, am here.
i like it when you bring me to you by reading this.
i like you. do you hear me?
i like you. bring me to you.
i am liking you by way of this opportunity.
i like you. here, you can have this. from me.
i like you so near me you hear me.
i like you so near me you are at me.
i like you. i give myself to you.
i like things. i have made this. you are here now. as much as you are here, i was too, as i have obviously left a note for you. and in a way, i am still here. we are here together. and i like you.
gnormal is awesome, right?
everybody should read him.
thanks for faving. i think this is as short as it can be
but i can leave out all the words 'cept for a single "i" for you.
wood yeah lie kit?
a single "i" for you?
you hava did et again a masterpiece.....
iiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii am in likingness
"i am in likingness"...
hmm...very nice to hear that, Lily.
now that's more like it.
what do you think?
is the space......i tell ewe
like a window with new curtains
simply a deal~eye~t....mwaa*
owe yore sew sue wheat, Liliana.
bumpeetee day, everee-one.