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Emerald Isle only speaks of you
miraclenzero

I can close my eyes;
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and feel the warmth of the fire,
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smell the charred wood.
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with scent of the sand in the air,  
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I feel wanted.
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Needed.
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The waves crash the sea plays in harmony
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suspending in the ring of my guitar.
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You see.
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With fragments of dreams in mind,
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I craft the most beautiful songs.
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One day I’ll show them to the world.
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Maybe you’ll hear them;
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maybe you’d believe it when i sing:
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"These images I share…put ever so elegantly;
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I’d give anything to be."
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31 Jul 08

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Lovely poem about poetry, is beautiful.. and i like that it can be read through the perspective of lovers sharing too
 — nisetru

NO ONE'S EVER DONE THIS BEFORE.
 — unknown

Great depth of sense.  Here's to the campfire superstars. Write on.
 — nugunz

i imagine Adam Sandler starting the fire with his ukelele.
: )
 — fractalcore

haha thats hilarious about adam sandler, if you could help me get this poem out soo muc more can read it
 — miraclenzero

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