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amazing how much a plastic bag holds
sir_I_clan

would I
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thieve poo
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press
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6 Aug 08

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I wish "incontinent" related to geography and not to soil.
 — netskyIam

are you referring to a stoma?
 — raskolniikov

No,
Rask, are you still doing your 11 thing ?, That use to make me laugh.
 — sir_I_clan

hello sir_i_clan, i have a different poetry place now. the diary 11 thing is on a shelf somewhere, i am still taking pictures, just not posting them to a diary.  i am glad it made you laugh, it was bloody hilarious for me aswell. :-)

could you explain your poem to me so i can rate it. i am not sure i understand it properly, sorry.
 — raskolniikov

yes sir - explain...............
 — unknown

at first i thought the poem was made up of words that could be found in the title... patent pending on that one!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! shit maybe i shouldn't post this
 — sunshinesgf

this poo is amazing.

in the bag, of course.
: )
 — fractalcore

i guess dj jazzy donald has deleted a shitload of older forum threads with no apparent criteria for which ones to delete. isabelle had started a thread like a public service announcement a few months ago warning everyone about glass patio tables that would suddenly shatter. it's now gone. i had replied with a public service announcement of mine own warning everyone to carefully inspect the little plastic poopoo bags they would be utilizing for to scoop up the dunglets left by their most lovable little furry dunging friends about the neighbourhood to be certain that there weren't holes in the corners of said bags that could allow the transmission of poopoo particles onto the scoopers' hands thereby perhaps causing some small measure of disappointment with the entire poopoo picking up procedure. as i recall trochee really appreciated that particular announcement. no shit.
 — chuckle_s

when i was teengager we had some unfriendly
people that lived two doors down and one night
our house got egg'd and my brother thought it
was them seeing how they didnt like us anyway
because they thought we were a group home
and so he went to their doorstep in the night
and made a poo right there and the next morning
he decided to poo'd in a plastic bag and he tied
it to the handlebars of his bike and flung it
on the neighbours porch in which it splattered
in such a fashion that it confirmed to the whole street
that 26 starfield crescent was indeed a group home
and no one was allowed near us after that.
 — unknown

bullroar
 — unknown

i love bullroar
but you can eat this one.
 — unknown

yesterday someone chalked around all the dog poo in our street and wrote 'our street is not a crapper'
 — unknown

good poem
 — stout

this comment really made me laugh

"yesterday someone chalked around all the dog poo in our street and wrote 'our street is not a crapper'"

my unknown teenager poo story was not received well by the other unknown; i don't think they believed me.  but...true story.

figures fract faved,
friggin poo lover.
=-)
 — jenakajoffer

could you explain your poem to me so i can rate it. i am not sure i understand it properly, sorry.
raskolniikov

amazing how much a plastic bag holds

would i
leave you

yes

An old (bad) relationship, decided enough was enough,only had a few minutes, met her at the door, she squeezed the plastic bag and asked if i was leaving her.
 — sir_I_clan

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