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BANDIT: ROBBED RABID
fractalcore

naught-tee bone sue-rounding
 1
left eye inn ore-bit gave
 2
no resistance when thee
 3
awe-there ball got snatched
 4
from eats right-full space
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left had been since then [left]
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skeptic about ev'ry right
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bent on tracking ev'ry looter down
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guilt as heavy as the drought in skin
 9
brittle with sin without a doubt
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law-shun
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written 07/13/08
http://poetrycritical.net/read/49521/
thanks, unknown.
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11 Aug 08

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any one-eyed bandit out there?
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 — fractalcore

banditfemme perhaps?
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 — fractalcore

hmm...this place is so freezing cold
my right eye-socket hurts.
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 — fractalcore

...

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quit pumping this one-armed sex machine
 — unknown

i likey

eye eye el~capiton
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1st unky:

a comment at long last
but a one-armed sex machine?

hmm, interesting.
thanks for sharing.
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 — fractalcore

2nd unky:

eye eye in bad deed.
eye thunk yee.
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 — fractalcore

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