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CHRIST CRISIS CROSS SIN-DROME
fractalcore

the announcement is a hoax —
 1
they're actually selling cat
 2
humerus stuffed with herb
 3
 
 
and you're not s'posed to
 4
light the damn thing up
 5
nor leave with it.
 6
 
 
but you leave and live
 7
 
 
anyway.
 8
 
 
we
 9
all
 10
do.
 11




for PrudIsDaWay.


written 07/15/08
http://poetrycritical.net/read/49481/
thanks, PrudIsDaWay.
: )

15 Aug 08

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thanks for the fave, nisetru.
any thoughts on the piece?
: )
 — fractalcore

the title certainly grabbed my attention and I knew it would be your iconic iconoclastic word play -- criss-cross'd my shoulder bone to my elbow while trying to say the BuddhaDharmaSangha -- ya' know the femer is often made into a horn and blown to scare away the hungry ghosts -- I think they like to dance the night away -- l7 to 11 is the way
 — AlchemiA

well then ghosts should learn to honk-to-munch so we
won't have to cripple someone or some cat to horn them
away and argue whether cats really have 9 lives or not
and if we humans really just have one life.

cats do humor us often, don't they?
: )
 — fractalcore

thanks, btw, sir AlchemiA.
: )
 — fractalcore

For Gods sake, write something we can all understand except for you and your croonies.
 — wasp

hi, wasp.

sorry about that; it's a problem i can't seem to address
but thanks for taking the time to read.
: )
 — fractalcore

  fractal~you is just Fee wine as ewe bee
 — Liliana

hi, Lily.

thank you for always taking the time to read.
: )
 — fractalcore

cat humerus stuffed with herb...
that's great.
i'd suggest that 7 would breathe and 8 could grow, were 8 planted atop 9.
just a thought.
nice
 — chuckle_s

good idea, chuckle_s.

but how 'bout i let "anyway" breathe on its own?
there.

what do you think?
: )
 — fractalcore

it's all good
 — chuckle_s

thanks, dude.
: )
 — fractalcore

hooray for "s'posed"
i will roll around in this often, it is that good. thizzshanks.
 — onklcrispy

a very great pleasure to have onklcrispy's
comments here. thank you for stopping by, sir.

that's the new new jezuss pose, i s'pose, hehe.
; )
 — fractalcore

Christ'sis of Lite

I mist you....
            ; R u Crazed?
and your hoax

I loved my kat...
            ; Am I fazed?
dat fun knee roast!

You left/right me....
            ; DO ur Best?
CoMo Toast

I lit it up.....
            ;  Do U jest?
No I Boast.
 — PrudIsDaWay

ooh, that's fantastic, Prud, and
really good to hear from you.

that can be a very fine first
post here.

thanks for dropping by.
; )
 — fractalcore

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