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Spring morn at drag strip.
Budding car strains to blossom.
On your mark. Get set.

18 Aug 08

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After listening to readers, I modified the poem. Thanks, Joseph
 — PoorPoem

dragstrip spring morning --
booming fukker car vaarooom!
onyerMark... let's go!!!
 — joey

vroom vroom?
: )
 — fractalcore

Yes, and cute title!  haha
 — Isabelle5

 — PoorPoem

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 — AlchemiA

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I was completely surprised by this piece, nice ( -:
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