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Postcard to Quebec II
trochee

carving garbled hearts on wooden planks
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of steel benches ghoulish in their melancholy
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a stranger with no maps
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just the cheerful crackle of your smile
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reduced to a photograph
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I pass by the scandalous basilica,
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the ancient tower leaning on an idle clock
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where your labyrinth soul nestled
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to the thought of my assuming presence
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and hurried legs jived to a pink umbrella
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I stood here for a spell of near memories;
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a red phone booth on a cobblestoned avenue
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which you may revisit and walk away
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but do not make the mistake of-
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24 Aug 08


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