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how are you?
fractalcore

i am very
 1
well thank Gawd
 2
as i don't have [m]any
 3
 
 
money to my name
 4




written 07/13/08
http://poetrycritical.net/read/49611/
thanks, raskolniikov.
: )

5 Sep 08

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mo money mo problems well isn't that gawd's (green) truth.
 — flourides

[f]awesome!
 — trochee

-fractalcore-
a few people here know i have a hard on for the number 11. you made my simple day with this poem.  

i am glad i inspired you to post this. how come i get a normal title though? i wanted a crAZy TiTle. ;-)

how are you besides?
 — raskolniikov

yes, flourides. you got it right.
thank you so much for reading
and commenting.
: )
 — fractalcore

trochee, foursome is better than
threesome, don't you think?

thanks, man.
: )
 — fractalcore

hi, rask.

glad to have made your day with this.
the normal title is to emphasize the sincerity
in the question and it's meant to be that way.
it's a sincere piece and it was inspired by
your comment under your piece # 49611
where you mentioned you'd just lost a huge
amount of money in some business transaction.

in this piece's sense, i am well, thank you.
besides that, i am the same.

hope you and everybody else are
and will be.
: )
 — fractalcore

fractal...
fawesome = fuckin awesome ;)
 — trochee

oh yeah, trochee...
: )
 — fractalcore

nice.
 — listen

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