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yes ohm ye yes a
rehurt by yo ufo
old ear to PC.

senryu #2
written 6/3/08
thanks, gnormal.
; )

10 Sep 08

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 — fractalcore

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[found the link at last, hehe]
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 — fractalcore

 — unknown

three seconds too
late a dee-lay...your
egg, Nels, on, the Man's
face is round and ore-range.
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 — fractalcore

welcome back.

just so's you know,
this is fissional matter
on the whole, sort of like
fishing for those extra syllables
and wurdz to make the mother
neutrons fit the fusin'-fission-fusin'
(5-7-5) hidden anomaly.

you spawn crazy ideas, man.
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 — fractalcore

a homage of wit with love in it -- I like the way duality is a wave, goes up 'n down, while as a particle of light will bend to the gravity of a deeper darker end
 — AlchemiA

thanks, Alc.

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 — fractalcore

gno idea
 — chuckle_s

aye want ewe too
gno dot eats gnothing much
really except fore

he's won off doze who gno
real booger inn duh gnose
inn duh event won smells
lilies ass if day had any sent at all.

sew aye wood dent really gno
what lilies smell like.

do ewe?
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 — fractalcore

my kitchen
 — chuckle_s

too hot in there.

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 — fractalcore

chuckle_s is burning his
ass in his burning kitchen.

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 — fractalcore

burning kitchen is key; chuckie don't cook much ;)
 — jenakajoffer

hee likes cheeyz?

he's overmelt

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 — fractalcore

bumpeetee day, everee-one.
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 — fractalcore

awe wHell.

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 — fractalcore

a 5-7-5 piece, btw.

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 — fractalcore

you yoko?
 — unknown

hell no, man.

i'm a man, hehe.
hope she's ok, though.
i know she's really busy these days.
4 shows a month, her man said.

and this piece actually reads:

yes, oh my eyes are
hurt by you, fool,
dear to PC.

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: )
 — fractalcore

just came up as random.
I always thought you were a girl,
sorry dude.

 — unknown

i actually think eddie vedder's a dudette
with a dude's voice, but that's just me
keeping still on a wild mustang while
perfecting the scorpion pose.

and, guaranteed is a cool dude's song, sir.

: )
 — fractalcore

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 — unknown

i hadn't known valium could give one some
really decent shots of wisdom till now. you
should go full throttle on it.

wish i could help you out with the search, though --
i can't even find the F13 key on my keyboard.

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 — fractalcore