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The Warm Can
Salamander

I will contemplate the nature
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of beer. A weapon in one
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hand, opened, a figure of
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distraction
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Like hotsauce on chicken
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I wonder, a movie where
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everything is the same
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except instead of chicken
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wings they eat dinosaur arms
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Wings are delicious
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Though
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          too greasy
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too much fat and
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not enough meat. I want
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meat with my blue cheese.
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15 Sep 08

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Chicken wings and blue cheese - yuck!
It did engage my interest however.
The first verse is rather weak - the line breaks are disconcerting.
 — unknown

interesting, but I sort of feel if one went for dinner with you, they wouldnt actually eat...
 — shaunsout

hot wings and blue cheese is delicious
 — unknown

hot wings and blue cheese ARE delicious
 — unknown

not bad.
 — Rhiannon1984

i don't eat anything that has veins.
chicken wings and blue cheese included.
hotsauce is not one word, but i get that you're being cute-ass.
boys who think they're men love hot sauce beer and chicken wings.
 — jenakajoffer

buffalo wings and blue cheese is good.
 — joshcoops

i thought the bleu cheese was for the carrots and celery.
 — jenakajoffer

order some buffalo wings
and they will always come with blue cheese and celery
 — joshcoops

Enough slimey chicken skins. Agreed.
 — unknown

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