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sir_I_clan

encase
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of
 2
emergency
 3
break
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out
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(everything)
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18 Sep 08


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~for someone else~
1111
 — raskolniikov

'encase' means to enclose, so 'encase of-emergency breakout (from the jail) everything' is like, everyone, break out of jail now! which is maybe more interesting than in case of emergency, break out (smash) everything, like i did to this.
 — joey

nicepoem.
 — hank

eye c
 — unknown

good poem
 — stout
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