Comments:
Ah hah. But everyone finds them interesting - so they've not got it so bad. Clever writing.
— SarahMichele
{sea through} synaptically wire'd, in lunacy moved, inspired --
3 - 10 - 3 ( 5 - 7 - 5 is the traditional syllabic beat ) is non traditional yet you've used a Nature theme which is traditional -- nevertheless well stresse'd
— AlchemiA
ha. charming, a fan of the 3-10-3
— peace
Whatsamotta with coelenterata?
Needs a seasonal allusion to be haiku.
— eljota
when the light hits it
the delicacy of life
coagulating
I am sure anywhere where jellyfish wash up it occurs in one season, the subtelty of the allusions of the classic form are indeed its beauty...not clunky like most western attempts...as in Basho's Young cat / grown thin / on love and barley
— unknown
So is 3-10-3 accepted now ? Hell I wish I'd thought of that !
— jet
hate is an obscene emotion
— chuckle_s
Hate can be completely pure, and human. Obscene is the only obscenity.
I didn't get into it. But if you did, then cool. Cool.
— nugunz
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