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kNow Ey-Row-DYe-In-A-Mix, YOU?
fractalcore

    you might've written an H in an O
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    on your [h]airfield, bay-bee-oh --
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    you keep still so the moschiquito
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     won't have to drive it in deep-oh
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   and steal your red greasy oil-ee-oh.
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              [both, yes, H and O]
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                           ...
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           among a captain of lousy
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     moschiquitos walking on crooked
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            absurdity, words re[a]d
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                    in the veins.
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          creepy, cheesy butterings.
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written between 9/22/08 and 9/26/08
in response to unknown and raskolniikov
@ http://poetrycritical.net/read/50972/

thanks, you guys.

1 Oct 08

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how ewe roight theese fingies?
 — unknown

not so bad. you're getting freer in your lines and clever, but the topic is clever, it'd be a re-do of brief encounter to make an english patient landing out of what is really a model airplane. nice model people and narrator too, and some pretty good poetry moves.
 — joey

that comment came too fast, unky.
couldn't even wait for me to finish the
refinements but thank you.

re yore quest-yawn:
hmm, let's see... am not sure really...
eyedjust bee mee, meethinks.

thunks fore stopping
bye.

: )
 — fractalcore

ah yes and still one can nut be
quite shower that one has grasped the hole message. proof belies inthe putting.

please light on the creeps and no butterings.
 — unknown

H and O  hohoho
 — Liliana

o....k.... i'll see what's what now that i can see. by the way, you realize that some people aren't going to read italian an they're not going to really be able to instantly process this, and that's against the izzy law?

'have you seen this poem?'
 — joey

thanks, joey.

it's s'posed to be a chopper -- or maybee a model
airplane posing as a [model] chopper on a mental plane
where skin is the [h]airfield and the point at which one
cannot be certain of words' depth or height unless one
scratches that surface for either direction.

freer, yes, i notice that.
at times i see myself writing, too.
OH well of words absurd.

again, thank you for the crit moves.
: )
 — fractalcore

unknown,

one cannot always be sure, right.
but what says your instinct when
you're left with only IT?

some One says "brainless" is good
and i say it's true as it is when one is
maybe unsure and with only his Being
to write...dumb things as they might be.

OH, i dunno really --
One can never be sure.
: )
 — fractalcore

Lily, thanks for always stopping by.
it might not be Xmas everyday but i feel the spirit
and i might just ho-ho myself away with this post,
hoho, er hehe.
: )
 — fractalcore

hi again, joey.

i've heard of some laddy, er ladies sporting some italian mustache and
looking groovy -- which also brings me to thinking that a gravy is a gravy
whether the chicken is italian or not...or so i think.

no laws are easy for sure.
: )
 — fractalcore

-fractalcore-
you are most welcome, glad to be of service.
 — raskolniikov

i set the table for you
aren't ya going to eat?
 — unknown

merry christmas
fractal
 — Liliana

thank you once again, rask.
: )
 — fractalcore

unky,

what's in the bowl?
chicken poodle soup?
veggie cow cream?

one can['t] eat while on shoulder-stand
and the table could be of little service.

thunk you for your hospitality.
: )
 — fractalcore

hi, Liliana.

do i get a Xmas gift?
sorry, my sox are
perforated big time.

: )
 — fractalcore

  si i will weave you a pair of crews  white?
 — Liliana

white is just perfect, Lily.
thanks.

do i get a talking Pooh bear?
: )
 — fractalcore

well...OK  a bear talking of pooh
sounds like a perfect mascot for pc- but not for ewe
 — Liliana

9 by 7 users, lol, you have to be freaking joking.  Could you write something in English that explains your reasoning please.
 — unknown

not good
 — unknown

unknown who is freaking unknown, who cannot read, wants to be read to in bed by whatever isn't hiding under his bed and so scary. vice-presidential candidate palin will be in in a moment to read you some comforting words from the book of the dead to 'why don't you write this so people can understand it?'
 — unknown

the unk just above this response,

so so sad, right? but i can live with that though.
it's ok really. maybe i'll have to apologize to them
for doing them this dis-service.

ok, sorry to them and thanks to you.
; )
 — fractalcore

"...
'have you seen this poem?'
— joey"


well, joey, i wouldn't know the difference but
i'd say i saw it crystallize before me eyes got
even a glimpse of its real nay-to-err

and i see no law above it, izzy, er easy, or not.
; )
 — fractalcore

so-so--
: )
 — fractalcore

bumpeetee day, everee-one.
; )
 — fractalcore

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