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RE: paradox aka Pandora's Box or Whatever that means.
fractalcore

they close it as soon as you open it.
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and same guy reopens it -- it? there's
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got to be just one lord of the key.
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maybe they're too scared of the
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critters in the box -- nope, it's a coffin
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for coughin' caffeine addicks.
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the poem resurrects as the crit when
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the occasion allows it and the poet
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creates and allows the occasion.
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bestial nation of hypo-crits.
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note the dash to avoid the
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clash or spawn it, whatever...
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written 10/2/08
http://poetrycritical.net/forum/read/157211/
thanks, joey.

3 Oct 08

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every definition of Poetry at alias Critical is full of holes -- there is a hole in your head where the wounds of reason seep and make it all absurd with words that crawl and creep -- where not much can be said about the stones laid on the dead, inside your head -- this is the box inside the box outside-in the box in your head that is where we lay the dead inside the box in your head
 — AlchemiA

that's not necrophilia where in the box is the dead we've served up from your head but whatever that means is in this box where dead crit(er)s go when you write down dead words that fell outside-inside your head instead
 — AlchemiA

i don't get the s in front of pawn?
 — unknown

ambitiously written, no chunk of art, just non-sense
 — unknown

thank you, Alc.

thinking critically is a critical thing to do and
would put one in a critical situation and position
in a coffin of ideas/concepts. to wish for thinking
to even start in my head is my kind of wishful
thinking. i'm very lucky every once in a red moon.

thanks to you as usual.
: )
 — fractalcore

1st unk:

i don't get it either. let's just say there is some
imaginary "[ ]" surrounding the "s".

thanks for stopping
bye.

: )
 — fractalcore

2nd unk:

are you referring to your comment?

oh, my post?
hmm, i'm on the verge of agreeing with
you but not yet.

i dunno, after an insightful maybe.
hmm...

but thanks for stopping
bye.
: )
 — fractalcore

i meant "insightful crit".
so where is it?
; )
 — fractalcore

so...
: )
 — fractalcore

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