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Nova Pie
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Troubleshooting,
 1
Literary references,
 2
AHHH! My mind is exploding.
 3
 
 
Twenty things,
 4
Windstorm, confusion,
 5
Lifting breathing, writhing,
 6
Exploding!
 7
When does the sentence end?
 8
 
 
Shaking,shimmy,
 9
Dancing, stop.
 10
Momentum
 11
Propells me forward.
 12
 
 
Failure is a windshield
 13
From no where
 14
Draws me closer.
 15
 
 
Magnetic, alooft,
 16
Why isn’t this ending?
 17
Faster, faster, rolling,
 18
Running, stop.
 19
 
 
Pause, breathe,
 20
Intake, osmosis,
 21
Run.
 22

6 Oct 08


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could this be obscene?
 — chuckle_s

It's an obscene ending.
 — SarahMichele
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