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I shall NEVER forget
punkroc13

This really happened to me.. and my friand.

I'll never forget what you did.
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You used rape and hurt me and take advantage of me.
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I'll always remember.
 3
 
 
I can't  take back my life.
 4
 
 
This has happened too long.
 5
 
 
Why u make me hurt?
 6
 
 
Why u make me cry?
 7
 
 
What have I done wrong?
 8
 
 
I try to make u as happy as I once was.
 9
 
 
I did wrong, didn't I?
 10
 
 
I was  just a little girl.
 11
 
 
My happiness is stripped away.
 12
 
 
I feel like nothing but trash.
 13
 
 
One day I will get u back for what u stole from me.
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When this happened I will be in a corner trying to regain my strength and courage...
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6 Oct 08


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only 5 words different and still just as bad.

wtf?
 — unknown

wtf are you talking about?
 — punkroc13

The writer can be described in two words: Dumb & Dumber
 — unknown

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