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fractalcore

ey,
 1
 
 
seems you're here yet
 2
or hear already.
 3
 
 
nice to sea ewe back, "friend".
 4
 
 
a donkey with balls, eh?
 5
 
 
see,
 6
these roads are wet in winter
 7
and iced in summer but the
 8
wheels keep rollin' with the eyes
 9
that knew who shot the sheriff
 10
out of view...
 11
 
 
nice ride --
 12
 
 
keep a-drinkin-en-drivin'
 13
 
 
...orb-seen...
 14
 
 
orb-saw-loot-lee...
 15
close the site down?
 16
the dawn of m'odds banned is close --
 17
orb eye must bee kid-roo-in?
 18
 
 
orb-see-lewdly
 19
OH well...
 20
 
 
glewd jorb --
 21
 
 
give them some
 22
b u m - p i n g .
 23
 
 
p u s h   @   w i l l .
 24
 
 
 
 
OK
 25
NO
 26
 
 
 
 
more kum-meant from mee ass-swell.
 27
dis is soooo sickeningly orb-seen.
 28
 
 
bee
 29
good
 30
wee
 31
should --
 32
 
 
good
 33
bye
 34
ewe
 35
too?
 36




for the MODerately drunk


written partly on 10/5/08
@ http://poetrycritical.net/forum/read/158001/
and on 10/7/08
@ http://poetrycritical.net/forum/read/158181/1 and 2

thanks, onklcrispy, chuckle_s, and mor
; )

9 Oct 08

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Yes! Thank you. I am moderately drunk and I fell for a pyramid scheme on this day, the ninth of october 2008. This pome goes well with it!
 — OKcomputer

how do you do italics?
 — unknown

hmm...
: )
 — fractalcore

type " whatever word(s) you want here in between "
where X = i for italics, b for bold, or u for underlined text.

thanks jenakajoffer for the tips from a while back.
and chuckle_s and unknown, too, i think.
: )
 — fractalcore

oh shi*t.

that didn't come out right.
pls take the first " as a
the second " as a

there.
: )
 — fractalcore

damn.
sorry.
just put an i, b, of u
in  and see.
: )
 — fractalcore

damn.
sorry.
just put an i, b, of u between a ""
and see.
: )
 — fractalcore

argh, i give up.
: )
 — fractalcore

nice.

really like line thirteen.
 — listen

orb-scene

"cover your eyes, children!"
 — chuckle_s

listen!

hiya!
well, i sometimes drive
with a little alcohol in my
veins but i'm really careful.

really good to see
you drop by.

: )
 — fractalcore

kids,

listen to good
ol' chuck, ok?

; )
 — fractalcore

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