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On Gordon and God
duality

shores hiliarious whiting
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imam a phisher of soles
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just weight jewel not misim atoll
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drop a line
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do a line
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reeling all the wile
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his breadth is baited
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thanks fractalated one
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22 Oct 08

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maybe he needs a mint?
 — unknown

no, pepperberry, he never mints es words

c/mon mike, i'm a board stiff.
gimme a mouthful wilya?
 — unknown

no mint- perhaps a blueberry then?
 — unknown

you see it is what you dont say (exactly) that is so profound!
it is your soul that one feels when they read. some will never
understand. this is ok- for the ones that do- just do.
 — unknown

oh hi, you sweet lil thing.

you've been Oming aumong us the whole
time and i didn't hear you?

forgive me, my left ear has been so clogged
these days
: )
 — fractalcore

moo chase grassy arse. unnoin

like i said fractalated one
this is yore pome

:)
 — unknown

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