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Love of My Life,
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o, sweet
 1
Poetry:
 2
I miss you so.
 3
I miss your
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seductive
 5
curves,
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the way
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your lines
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feel on my
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lips and tongue,
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and the way
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you
 12
make my heart go
 13
too fast or too slow
 14
as your essence
 15
tickles my
 16
fingertips,
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the way
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you
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look at me,
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sprawled on soft
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cream colored sheets,
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that subtle wink I
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think you give me,
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but can’t be sure.
 25
 
 
o, sweet
 26
Poetry:
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I have a
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confession,
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a terrible
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confession.
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there is
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another
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was
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another
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never should have been
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another.
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I promise you:
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prose
 39
meant
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nothing
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to me.
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those awkward
 43
paragraphs and
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sour sentences.
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always hogging
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the sheets.
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always wanting
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more and
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more and
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more and
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ugh.
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I just needed it
 53
out of my system
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after we had
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that
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rough patch.
 57
 
 
but, I’m back,
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if you’ll have me,
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Poetry,
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sweet, sweet Poetry
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if you’ll have me back
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I promise
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if you’ll just have me back
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I’ll never touch
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another paragraph
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as long
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as I
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live.
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not even a
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prose poem.
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Verse, my love,
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iambic or free,
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you’re the only
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words for me.
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xoxo,
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you know
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who
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9 Nov 08


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