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wolf trap
stout

don't like
 1
the police
 2
the moths
 3
in my chamber
 4
the mosquitos
 5
in my cup
 6
 
 
leaps i like
 7
raw voices loud
 8
trumpets
 9
 
 
bone marrow
 10
climbing
 11

13 Nov 08

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I like the consistency of this poem. It reminds me of family camping trips to crowded public campgrounds. Not sure if that's what you were going for though. Well done overall.
 — stackpop

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