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If Love Were a Butterfly
technomancer

If love were a butterfly,
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then I'd give chase
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and later make my case.
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29 Nov 08

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this reminds me of some of the Green Porno movie shorts by Isabella Rossellini (they're on youtube if you want to see them)

I'm not sure what you're trying to get at here... it needs more visuals and images, because the action's just hanging there without a paddle.
 — Virgil

keep your eye on the cocoon
and make haste for the butter
later on, hehe.

; )
 — fractalcore

flippin YES.
 — mandolyn

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