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She brings the morning sun
Mudd

She brings the morning sun
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at the darkest of midnight.
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She brings the morning sun
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when all above is lead.
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She brings the morning sun
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as rain slaps the earth.
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She brings the morning sun
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for him.
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I hope that each day
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he remembers to look in her eyes
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and tell her
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how beautiful she is.
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I hope that one day
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he will forget, that maybe then possibly
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I will tell her
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how beautiful she is.
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Maybe then I will be the one
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to bask in her soft glow
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warmed by her mere presence.
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I will then inevitably, one day, forget
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and her sun will set
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only to rise again
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the next time somebody tells her
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how beautiful she is.
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2 Jan 09


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