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She brings the morning sun

She brings the morning sun
at the darkest of midnight.
She brings the morning sun
when all above is lead.
She brings the morning sun
as rain slaps the earth.
She brings the morning sun
for him.
I hope that each day
he remembers to look in her eyes
and tell her
how beautiful she is.
I hope that one day
he will forget, that maybe then possibly
I will tell her
how beautiful she is.
Maybe then I will be the one
to bask in her soft glow
warmed by her mere presence.
I will then inevitably, one day, forget
and her sun will set
only to rise again
the next time somebody tells her
how beautiful she is.

2 Jan 09

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