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HD Beauty
onesandzeros

I longed so vividly
 1
for 1 and 0, beautiful adaptations
 2
of the world that consumes me
 3
binary women, on par with calypso
 4
computed lovers
 5
ESC from
 6
pregnant androids
 7
bellies full
 8
impassioned keying onto luminous screening
 9
my picket F3nces
 10
CTRL direction
 11
ALT her input
 12
DLT DLT DLT
 13
I drown in the waves
 14
of a tumultuous C://
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a digital dream in HD
 16

5 Jan 09

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Comments:

nice write. love the flow.

I like the way you have incorporated some light computer jargon to illustrate a certain mindset.
 — stackpop

pretty cool.

you are given 1 & 0 side-by-side
& F4ved.
: )
 — fractalcore

to long vividly
is different, for sure.

i liked it; not usually my bag
but it worked itself out on me,
for what it is,
good.
 — jenakajoffer

thank
much
all
^_^
 — onesandzeros

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