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Water it Down
vida

floating towards somewhere
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the dancing winds go missing
 2
boundless movements towards...
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perhaps a collision of hide and seek,
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cracking down on my mind
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dusty choices ache for choosing
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their way, nothing more yesterday.
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too bad I float on an imaginary comfort,
 8
of little pieces of love, parts...
 9
simple pieces of me, hah parts gone missing
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everything rubbed me wrong,
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i'm looking for the exit, people seem
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so very serious, I want to water it down,
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water people down a bit, break them up
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into little pieces...
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8 Jan 09

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perhaps... perhaps... perhaps....
 — unknown

nice.
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 — fractalcore

Thank you
 — vida

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