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cathy
mrkhoo

if i must always think of
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your body, your
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fuzz (moann)
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den eew muss swirley
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naught noe eet wen eew
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weesh mi guud moaning!
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if ever i must ruin here and now
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say something silly, chase you upstage
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then understand me this
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is not how i imagined it
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to be picking up a girl
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in my 830 dance class
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4 Feb 09

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What??

Hey what a fresh one.

Thanks for the read,
 — ElsieTime

Ugh.  I'm too tired 2day.  Can't get thru all deese sheet.  ;-)
 — starr

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