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i dance to impress
mrkhoo

i  dance to impress (you might be
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looking at me), shake my hips though it's
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funny (to have you regard me as no redness
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no coy, what a real man should be), leading you
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with blushing cheeks(your light fantastic buttcheeks)
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i fear i will trip (beautifully, your thighs
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uncoil muscle; i dropandrelease straight into)
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you while we cling cheektocheek(god, your eyelids flutter and
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my body squirts tingling emotion) and sweat
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our temples share (from what must be your halo
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sweet orange heat)
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because i dance to impress you(so close closer closely
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we meet) between breasts i feel you open up to me
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11 Feb 09


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