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hunt
stout

forlorn
 1
sectioned into peril
 2
into vats of
 3
boiling moss
 4
 
 
germinate
 5
push
 6
build that barn
 7
 
 
unlock the shrivel
 8
fry up the bacon with the drivel
 9
 
 
cannibals we
 10
smear
 11
lemongrass onto
 12
charred body
 13
 
 
heat up the coals
 14
liven up the ponies
 15
drive out the fowl
 16
 
 
segue
 17
 
 
kill
 18
 
 
then boil the liver
 19

13 Feb 09


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almost all your poems combine love and detestation.
 — hank

evisceration is an alluring theme, but , more compellingly, are you a disciple
of Marmite?
 — banditfemme

marmite? the pot or the condiment?
i think i don't disciple. that's for poets
mostly about detestation.
hank yours are mostly about discovery
 — stout

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