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Looming
trochee

Time broods
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like an open book
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face down and marked
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on the page about still life.
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19 Mar 09

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May I say that "There's a huge emptiness here that stares from all the faces, All that is lost must be looked for once more"   F.L.     j.g. smiles... this is discussion right... of the poem right...
 — goeszon

THank you
 — trochee

Instant imagery - well crafted :)
 — dia

Nice!  Succinct imagery.  Well done.
 — sybarite
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