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DR. UGG (E.D)
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spin cycle;
 1
 
 
water leaves wormhole
 2
to enjoy the flow
 3
of heaven's divine,
 4
warm froth or brine?
 5
 
 
She laughs little streaks
 6
of grey on blackest night
 7
as brightest day tweaks
 8
multicoloured orbs;
 9
where am I?
 10
 
 
more importantly;
 11
 
 
who am I not....
 12
 
 
I am not drunk,
 13
but the other,
 14
drip drip drip....
 15

26 Mar 09

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a nice little mystery... lines 6 and 7, just sublime thinking..

a good read..
 — Gynoid

i watched at least 3 dozen reruns
of the 'the drunken master' when
i was small.

now i'm still small but this made me
think i'm jacky chan stowing away
from the shawl-lean temple.

nice kung-fu, section4.
; )
 — fractalcore

dripping rain on my parade-
:)
 — mandolyn

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