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If I could live my life,
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I’d do it in the most simplest way.
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I’d build up all the people,
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and watch them fly away.
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17 May 09


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so what would you do if you couldn't live your life?
die in the deadest death way
 — unknown

if I could ever live my life
much simpler not to try
i'd make you wings
from broken things
and teach you how to fly.

this is an old one.
 — unknown

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