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Little I-Luv-i-ay
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She came at me
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from where I never knew
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flashing those wide dark ovals
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that peeked of mysterie and malaise
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under my radar
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swoopt in plain sight
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grabbed at my heart and stole away
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till I gave chase
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snatcht it up in a trice
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and grabbed her soul for evensies
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The lickle imp she was
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Neighbors dilling darling,
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darling dilling,
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she turned our orbs topsy-turvy
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yet dwelt atop our lists
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special invitee whom naught need be called forth
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for all occasions mischief-ready
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un-four-get-table,
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under table, underfoot,
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captivated our body parts
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Till at last I snatch’d her nose and made her beg to return it to its rightful owner
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which she always claim’d to be
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and coyly too
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then ran away
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And to whom I gave in all ways
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and forever would I
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25 May 09

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