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With Teeth
cubbzor

Black and white portraits frame the hallway
 1
Bitter angst wallows pouring from tragic haste
 2
 
 
Dusted corners reveal neglect and tinted times
 3
Dangling cobwebs reap neigh, almost tattered torso
 4
 
 
Curtains hinge on window, paining souls afar
 5
Cannot half onto waste, plight sings art
 6
 
 
Enter beast bearing teeth
 7
Attempting to resurrect souls that lay beneath
 8

27 May 09

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Do I detect a poltergeist? Or the devil himself?  A house + an evil presence = Amityville...I like the choice of words - especially the 5th and 6th couplet...
 — JKWeb

do I detect a meaning that suits me ?
 — unknown

do I detect detection?
 — cubbzor

I mean 3rd couplet or lines 5 & 6...hmmm
 — JKWeb

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