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on won street

i visit whores	1
and pay for them	2
with money	3
my mommy	4
sends me	5
for school.	6

i then eat noodles.	7

11 Jul 09

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noodles are go foryou
— unknown

whores are better.
— unknown

Hilarious!
— magnet

This is soooo funny! I need to check out your other stuff. EXcellent! Extra duck sauce? :-)
— starr

i love noodles.
in fact, i just had some.

i think there are noodle
poems lying around, too.

the hairy variety must be
the most expensive but i
wouldn't know for sure.

; )
— fractalcore

hahaha. your school's on gropecunt lane? (the name of many a main street in england during medieval times, indicating the active prostitution district there.)
— Virgil

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