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1.     EROSION
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whenever she appeared
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to wander he would
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thrust a little deeper
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     until he had
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        eroded
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       all doubt.
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2.    GUEST
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She would slip out
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somewhere between
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a thrust and a kiss
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  and return as an
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     awkward
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       guest.
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3.   SENTIENCE
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  She cared not whether
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every kiss was approval or
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  commiseration but for
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         interface.
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11 Jul 09

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SENTENCE:

threefold hedonistic.
thrice the fun.
 — fractalcore

PROOF OF SENILITY:

i forgot to affix this:

; )
 — fractalcore

crap
 — unknown

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